13 of #100HappyThings
Another dimension,
Another time,
Another ignition,
Another rhyme.
Go back to the start,
Twisting your head;
Awaken your heart:
Rebirth of the dead.
Open your eyes
After they’d been shut,
Warm the ice
And just sew the cut.
It will get better,
That’s what they say,
Today you suffer,
Tomorrow you’ll slay.
I do call it decent…more than decent. I loved the pacing. Rhyming requires a deft touch and there’s no pretension or forcing it here. Thank you for sharing…I look forward to reading more of your work 🙂
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Thank you. This means a lot. 🙂 It’s been awhile since I last wrote a poem with a light mood. Let this be a start. 🙂
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Not a bad place to start! Stay inspired and keep inspiring.
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